- 21:52 Revising to eliminate passive voice from descriptions is an effing P.I.T.A. 🙁 I end up cutting a lot of the description entirely! #
- 21:55 That’s not a bad thing, actually, & the prose is much improved for being active & spare. But my readers will need aggressive imaginations! #
- 22:07 Man, it’s getting brutal in the bookselling world! Bookstore rivalry leads to alleged threat: is.gd/AelB #
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